@Gnosomai Emauton said
"I'd say you have a really good outline starting here. I can basically grasp the threads of your thinking and all of it seems to be connecting in fruitful ways. My only recommendation would be to start pushing yourself to add detail and more real world examples so that you can flesh it out into a meatier essay. Go one section at a time, figure out what you're really aiming at, and write too much. Once you've gone too far, it'll be easier to edit it back down to size and say exactly what you mean. Once you've gotten it to the point that it says exactly what you mean to say, then the critiques of others will start to mean more to you because you'll know that they've read what you meant to put out there rather than hoping that they grasp what you've only suggested."
I really respect the reply from you. I will sleep on it and unfold the process it brings.
I guess people are only capable to do what their current Will can do, including me. I suppose that is why the masters are silent.